I believe that aliens exist simply because the universe/space is way too big for Earth to be the only planet with life forms. Some people think it's a conspiracy like Bigfoot or the Loch Ness monster but if either of those really did exist then we would have definitely found them by now; our technology is too advanced not to. On the other hand, there is no way we can trace aliens because we don't know if they have finger prints, cells, hair or anything like that which causes us to have no lead. The scientist Stephen Hawking says in the article "Hawking: Aliens may pose risks to Earth" that it might not be a good idea to interact with them. Another thought is that why would there be so many claimed sights of UFOs, alien life on Earth, and especially Area 51. If aliens didn't exist then there would be no need for Area 51 to be so secretive because the whole purpose of Area 51 is to keep all alien and paranormal activity top secret. If there wasn't anything in area 51 to hide then the sign that indicates the boarder of Area 51 wouldn't say photography is prohibited. The original purpose of the base is to test out new military aircraft and weapon systems but there's constantly shows, news and pictures of the military's new weapons all over the place. If there were no secrets behind area 51 then it would be less restricted since it is just a "military base".
A recent blog/article that I've read said that UFO sightings have increased 67% in three years.The blog/article has some very interesting footage of UFOs over Kansas City and Japan. One of the videos shows this moving ball of light in the sky that splits into three, then into five. I'm pretty sure no US aircraft is able to do that. Another video explains and shows footage of a civilian airplane pilot picking up a UFO on the radar of his plane that is about four times bigger than the aircraft he was flying. No US aircraft is possibly that big. Not even the ones associated with the military. Here is a link http://www.huffingtonpost.com/2011/08/26/ufos-pilots-history-channel_n_935847.html
A basic overview of this is that aliens exist because space and all of the galaxies are too big for us to be sure that there aren't any other life forms other than the ones on Earth. Also, there are too many things that the government keeps secret from all of us civilians. For all we know, we could have already had alien contact.
You have a very interesting topic. The facts you have on your topic are very good. You bring up some good points about area 51 and how secretive it is. My only suggestion is to create a mla format list for your sources.
ReplyDelete-You have a good topic sentence in my opinion because I like how you started out with your opinion but at the same time expressed your argument and what you were going to be talking about.
ReplyDelete-You had very good support and a lot of good details. These supporting details really helps support your argument and main point
- Your transitions are also pretty good, in a few spots you could stronger join sentence ideas, but for the most part it is good
- Overall I really like the topic and I can relate to it because I strongly agree with your argument
-The only suggestion is just expand a little on certain sentences
I like your topic because of how unique it is. It is highly unusual and not very mundane which is a nice change of pace. You mentioned Area 51 which isn't a suprise considering its secret nature and Stephen Hawking, so you did a good job backing up your facts.
ReplyDeleteYou might want to back up your mysterious lights and aircraft claim. There might be aircraft that can do that do large aircraft, you just need to go to Google.
Otherwise, good job, if maybe a little paranoid.